Teacher Marking: Laszlo-Moholy Nagy Work, AO2 and AO3- 29/09/21
Teacher Marking: Laszlo-Moholy Nagy Analysis, AO1- 8/10/21
Peer Marking:
22/10/2020 - (Peer Evaluation Timmy) - Experiment "Texture/Pattern": Most of the pattern has a flowing nature, its pleasing it look at and gives your eye a direction to follow. I like the subtle cut from two of your photographs, it allows for some natural contrast between two focus points. You need to enhance the shadows in the composition, when focusing on texture maybe try sharpening areas you'd like to have in high focus. The bottom right corner of the composition is a little too obviously cut. I think this will be resolved if you experiment with mid tones, however, only select that specific area as the other areas of the composition have perfect natural toning. Grade B+
22/10/2020 - (Peer Evaluation Timmy) - Experiment "Form": By giving a glowing highlight to the horns you've achieved to highlight the key element of form you were achieving. The light-dark contrast created by the composition is effective as it links to the morality the sculpture represented. You need to make the background mute, this can be achieved by making it a monotone colour but also removing any shadow in it, I believe this will allow for the form of your focuses to be highlighted more than before and can be achieved by cloning blank areas and stamping them onto any distractions in the background (bottom left corner). Grade A
Self and Teacher Marking: Gallery Visit Edits, AO2, 2/11/21
Teacher Marking: Edward Weston Edit and Analysis, A02, 19/11/21: